I'm thinking about You like, 
like sleepers think about sleep and 
Sleep thinks about dreams 
and my dreams think about You.

I'm thinking about You, yes, it's true.
I'm thinking about You like a kid thinks about toys,
and toys soldiers think about real soldiers 
and real soldiers think about kids.

I'm thinking about You like unbelievable,
like dancing thinks about rain, 
and rain thinks about rainbows
and rainbows think about Skittles 

I'm thinking about You like i can't even describe!
like the muffin man thinks of Drury lane,
like i think about muffins,
like muffins wish they were cupcakes but they're not because they are just too ugly

I'm thinking about food, HA no I'm thinking about You.
I'm thinking about You like crap thinks about country and rap
like music thinks about Mozart
and Mozart thinks about Bach
and Bach thinks about.. the organ?

I'm thinking about You like fat people think about diets!
like diets think about diet coke
like diet coke thinks about french fries
like the french think about the Eiffel tower
and the Eiffel tower thinks about lady liberty
and lady liberty thinks about being re-gifted to japan
like japan thinks about being Asian... 
wow that was racist

I'm thinking about You...and your mother
I'm thinking about You like mothers think about children
and headphones think about blaring
and rock thinks about roll
and hip-hop thinks about rap
and rap thinks about the blues
painters think about blues
and blues think about greens 
and greens think about reds
and reds think about yellows
and red yellow and green are Rastafarian colors
BOB MARLEY!!!

I'm thinking about You like chefs thinks about herbs and spices.
and herbs think about weeds 
and Bob Marley thinks about weed
gardeners think about weeds overtaking their garden

You are like a weed that has run rampant through my mind.
I can't get You out...
I like it that way
cause I'm thinking about You...
like like thinks about love
and love thinks about hate
I couldn't hate You
like I couldn't hate a puppy
I'm thinking about You like love doesn't think of time 
it just goes forever
today thinks about tomorrow 
tomorrow thinks about yesterday

I'm thinking about ...

12 comments:

  1. Hot shat. Loved the Rastafarian part, ha ha.

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  2. I thought this was very creative...goal accomplished, yeah? I liked how you mostly connected every new like to the previous, but did still have some variance with that. I really liked the simile of the weed that you can't get out of your mind.

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  3. Oh, love. Awesome blend of smart and funny, I love how you transitioned from thing to thing. Also, your dorky little comments are hilarious, I love this: "wow that was racist" Like, who do you think you are? Great post.

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  4. I really liked the variety that flowed through the whole thing. It wasn't "I'm thinking about you... I'm thinking about you-' the whole time. Really creative with a lot of the things you said. The rainbow thinks about Skittles. I'm completely sure:)

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  5. BOB MARLEY. That was the coolest thing I have ever read! I really like your writing. You have a unique way of writing and it works, this was really good

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  6. like the french think about the Eiffel tower
    and the Eiffel tower thinks about lady liberty
    and lady liberty thinks about being re-gifted to japan
    like japan thinks about being Asian...
    wow that was racist

    this was my favorite part.

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  7. "like the muffin man thinks of Drury lane,
    like i think about muffins,
    like muffins wish they were cupcakes but they're not because they are just too ugly"
    Worship this line haha :P But muffins are better than cupcakes haha :P but anywho good job i really enjoyed this.

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  8. wow!! that was awesome!! i really like your style! muffins are freaken ugly!

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  9. ferb fletcher, I saw this shirt with a bunch of cupcakes on it and one muffin. the cupcakes are saying that "muffins are just ugly cupcakes" and the muffin is saying "cupcakes are just haters!" don't judge a muffin or cupcake by how it looks, judge it by the taste.

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  10. I loved this! So good! I thought the whole rasist/asian thing was funny. Great job, very creative!

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  11. Your ending is phenomenal. I love your reference to love not thinking about time because it goes on forever.

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